Friday, January 14, 2011

~Smritir pata~

Jokhon

Manush haray smritir patay...
Abchha aadhipotyo;
Shunnyo ghore edik odik
chhinnovinno ostitto!

Badami molat haway orey...
Moner tepantorey;
Naa haranor shorto sab e
Haray ogochorey!

Shikol diye baandhbe jibon
Mrityu badhonchhara;
Smritir patay obadhyota
Baron manena ora...

Cholte giye klanto jokhon
Dwiprohor er somoy;
Ekla ekla dukkho vuley
Ekakittwo sohay...

Cholte pothe thaamte hobe
Khonik khushir khoje...
Swopno hoye kothao jodi...
Aashar nupur baje!

5 comments:

Sourabh said...

Much better... Much much better. Indeed the best among your last few writings.

Beautifully blended the remembrance and it's pain, irony of life and death. I will say this is your coming of age poetry simply because it ends with a lovely smile after going through all the unheard agonies.

Probably this poem of yours tells what you always speak of life - "Yes life is pain, life is agony, life is cruel but life is ecstasy, life is smiling also."

Bravo !!!

Nabanita said...

:) yaaa....I still love life....itz a love hate relationship...it makes me strong...from inside...a game that gives me a lot of pain...n a few nice moments...to remember...so that I can get d strength in my tough times...
n thank u once again...for the encouraging words...

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

"Cholte pothe thaamte hobe
Khonik khushir khoje..." ...very true, but we forget this quite often.. Nice composition.

Nabanita said...

u forget this very very often....afaik... :)

Vivek Panda said...

khub shundor... :)

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