Friday, January 14, 2011

~Shunyo~

Shunyotara odvut hoy boro
Dhorte tader para jaay na motey...
Naa thekeo obaadh jatayat
Jokhon tokhon moner majhe jotey...

Dupur seshe raatri hothat naamle
Moner majhe shunnyota ke pabey...
Chokher jole balish vijbe jokhon
Shunyotader jatayat baarbe...

Tobu jodi juddho korte chaao
Shunyota ke shunyo kore dekho...
Haater mutho alga koro ebar...
Smritider sab jotno kore rakho!

Smritir aghaat shunyotake daake
Shunyotader songi shunyo mon...
Smritir sathe juddho kothin boro
Jodhhokhetro tomaar amaar jibon!

4 comments:

Sourabh said...

Over the time it seems you have changed your style... This one gives that smell.

It's a kind of poem where I felt feelings of hope and surrender comes and goes; indeed a unique style. Honestly speaking it's like one complex poetry even if it is not complex. But very nicely written and moves the human inside deeply.

Specially last four lines grips the heart...

Nabanita said...

hmm..in last 5-6yrs i have changed my style of writing quite a few times..sometimes I changed it intentionally..to experiment with a new style..n sometimes it just happened...mood swings n all I guess...

n thank u...I hope u liked dis style :)...n yes this time couldn't write something simple and easy flowing...

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

New style.. (only the 2nd and 4th lines rhyming)...pretty unique.. and oi repeatable structure ta follow korechhish dekhlam ("Shunyotader songi shunyo mon...")...Excelling writeup... khub shundor hoyechhe eta...

Nabanita said...

oi style ta puro amaar...copyright neoa aachhe....

hmm new style...tokhon etai aaschhilo...

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