Wednesday, April 06, 2011

~Pothik~

Jokhon
Dupure bela aandhar aase neme
Roder taape purchhe chokher jol;
Hothat kore moner porda uthe
chokher saamne smritir kolahol...

Tor jonnye aankini kono chhobi
Tor jonnye likhini kobita...
Vaabtam bujhi bujhis je tui sab
Na bola sab gopon moner kotha...

Aanka sekha tor haat ta dhore
Kobitagulo o tor kaan chhuye jeto...
Mishti haasir onuvuti ta chhara..
Bakkyogulo ki konodin pran peto??

Aajke jokhon hothat chokhe vaase
Mondo valor kichhu muhurtora...
Smritigulo jotno kore rakhi...
Moner majhe thaakuk bondi ora!

Aajo majhe majhe sporsho pete chai
Tarporete bujhi brithai chaaoa...
Taai notun kore nama pother khoje
Pothik hoyei poth ke khuje jaoa..

11 comments:

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

about the kobita, nijer emotions(?)khub bhalo express korechhish....to someone outside, just as a kobita dekhle sheta bahoba pabe... it's about the feel....kobitar dik theke dekhte gele khub shundor. :)

Nabanita said...

was thinking about Maa while writing this one...
misinterpret korechili.. okk...seta hotei paare...
just 1ta kotha sporsho suhui partner ta chayna manush...ba craving taao alwyz partner er jonnyo hoyna...taai na??? :-) life e harano manush k kokhono khub pete ichhe kore...

Nabanita said...

n yes i take it as my discredit that the piece couldn't reach u properly...n u couldn't understand the emotions underneath... will take care of that nxt time for sure :)

Sourabh said...

A "poetic" composition from you - probably your first one. Very sweetly expressed a soul's blue spirits. Unlike your earlier sad compositions reading this doesn't give a sinking a feeling in the ocean of sadness rather it stays stable.

Only words I can say of this is feeling and feeling all around expressed very sweetly.

Loved this...

Vivek Panda said...

bah besh laglo... khub shundor kotha gulo sajiyechis... shobdo-choyon ar onubhuti ... dutoi shomaan shundor :)

Suchismita Barua said...

superlike..khub bhalo likhecho.... check out my blog too

JACOBSIELTS said...

Great blog! Great thoughts! Keep up the good work, writer!

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Bratati said...

nice composition......feelings are beautifully depicted....keep it up

Nabanita said...

thank u masimoni :)

Bhaskar Chakrabarty said...

oshadharon moner bhabna.....khubi porichhonyo o sposhto....

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