Tuesday, June 15, 2010

Badhon

I almost left writing....absolutely....n finally a couple of nights ago..penned it down while talking to somebody....we're not really talking..it was fighting....may be itz not a good one...but itz a come back one for sure....


Char dewale bondho sobai...
Bondho shorir, bondho monon;
Ondho chokhe bondho kaalo...
R khola chokhe nivchhe agun.

Raater taray sopno bondho...
Haater chhnoyay smriti;
Moner kone bondho asha...
Jotil jibon priti.

2 comments:

Sourabh said...

Hmmm... Short one yet speaking many things. But must say it's a very melancholic writing, reading gives a feeling as if an oppressive silence is killing slowly from inside.

Expressed the frustrated feeling of being caged from inside beautifully... Liked the last line "Jotil jibon priti." It more or less sums up very effectively the entire essence...

Lucifer said...

Tomar ebar parle sms language ae lekhata chere dewa uchit :)

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