Tuesday, June 22, 2010

~Elomelo~

Onno amaar onno aami...
kaaler baanke thomke agami;
sedin chhilo obadh jatayat
aaj
haariye gechhe sesab daami raat.

aajke nisedh probesh duare...
Nabola kotha baarchhe hajar-e!
Saanjh akaashe baali-dhulo
Amaar haariye jaoa kotha gulo...
hothat haralo chirotore...
amaar moner ontore!


Keu shunte paabe ki??

2 comments:

Sourabh said...

"Onno amaar onno aami..."
One of your most beautiful starting... Giving a shivering feeling of a hidden darkness inside. I can say it's quite short and simple but portrayed the silent tears and within that a quest to make yourself understand is very tenderly described.
Best thing is not an aggravated sorrow but described with an idea of rediscovery.

It's a different one from you... Keep experimenting, want to see more of such deviations.

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

*Thumbs up*.. hariyeo harayni onek kichhu/cheshta korlei paowa jabe shob kichhu :) ...

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