Friday, April 02, 2010

~Poth~

Kotha gulo fossil,
Aar shobdu gulo muk...
Ushno chokhe shitolota
Dukher faande sukh...

Nitya notun jibon khela,
Dur pallar gari...
Ojana station e thaamle pore
Nana poshrar saari...

Ku jhik jhik jibon track-e
Haray moner rong...
Klanto shorir shranto mone
Jibon abohomaan...

6 comments:

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

Toke shedinkei bolechhilam... tor moto kore nijer mon-er kotha ponkti-te obhibyakto korte khub kom jon-ei pare... great one !!

I'll show you some sun btw :) nice warm sunshine :) ..

Sourabh said...

Glimpse of light???
Yes it's showing up in the composition. Feeling like a mellowed waking in the morning. Really nice to read this...

Soft, sweet writing where every line is giving an impression as if dark clouds had finally given out way sunlight. And above all definitely MOTIVATING !!!

srijankundu said...

দারুন লাগলো

zack_lee said...

i like it ,,,so nice to read

rick said...

khub bhalo laglo parle amar kabitagulo paro....http://kabitarkhata.blogspot.com

Amrita said...

BAH!!!....REALLY GREAT........TOR LEKHAI KATHAR BADHON KHUB SUNDOR...

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