Thursday, June 04, 2009

~Saap-Ludo~

Ora pother dhare goragori dey
Dhulobali mekhe;
Kana chal r mota bhaate
Din katay sukhe.

Chherakhora jama pore
Haat baariye daray;
Vanga khelnay anondo pay
Nalar jole jhapay...

Footpath e haath mele dey
Aadhuli poisa futo;
Sobuj baatir wrong route-e
Kheluk saap-ludo.

Dekhe vaabi esab niyei
Aache ora besh;
Moi diye opore uthe
Saap er mukhe sesh...

2 comments:

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

Already told you about this. Fantastic piece.Very well written and the way you express yourself is the thing to look out for.
Darun hoyechhe...kudos!![:)]...

Sourabh said...

"Moi diye opore uthe
Saap er mukhe sesh..."
What a line... Simply outstanding !!!
It's a topic which probably as far as I remember you touched for the first line... But still sensitivity is evident in every line, bizzare yet expressive highly !!!
Good begining...

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