Friday, June 12, 2009

~Mrityu Nirbaak~

Tumi bolle eso...
raat nil holo,
apel er bishakto chumbone;
Sab rong ek hoye gelo.

Tumi bolle sajo...
moyur pekhom mello
Batas mridumondo chhunye gelo.

Tumi bolle brishti...
Gaale ese chhnulo tup tap;
Jeno premiker onasristi.

Tumi bolle valobasa...
tolpaar holo Neelnod
somudro sorbonasa.

Tumi bolle cholo...
Grand canion poth banalo majhe
haway chul elo melo.

Tumi bolle mrityu...
odhora chokhe aami nirbaak;
Brishti elomelo
Proloy ghotiye gelo
Tobu Aaj mrityu noy
Jibon hobe sobak.

9 comments:

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

Aaar tui nije ki bolli? [:)]

*Adjectives diye shundor kobita-take noshto korbo na*..tui nijei janish koto bhalo hoyechhe eta..[:)]..

Nabanita said...

aami nirbaak [:)]

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

Aar ami jibon bolle?

Nabanita said...

"JIBON" bole to dekh....ekbar...
kobita ta onno rokom kore debar dayitto tokhon abaar....

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

"Jibon"[:p]..lekh bolchhi onnorokom kore..[:-w][:p]...

Sry..khilli marar lobh shamlate parlam na[:p]...[:P]...

Nabanita said...

no probs....khilli kortei paaris....chaap nei[:D]

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

ha ha...[:p]...

Sourabh said...

Lady... This is your best creation so far !!! What exotic metaphors and outstanding addressals. Hat's off to the unusual way the subject is dealt with and exquisitely beautiful depictions of tenderness and grandeur.

Waiting for more of such brilliant creations....

Nabanita said...

@dadamoni- thnx a lotttt 4 such a cmmnt....itz really encouraging... :)

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