Sunday, September 02, 2007

~JUST NOW~

[PENNED IT DOWN IN MOBILE.....WITHOUT ANY THOUGHT...]

Just now
I felt helpless;
Just now
I felt your embrace.
Just now
I wanted to runaway
Just now
You've shown me the right way.
Just now
I closed my eyes in dark;
Just now
You brought to me the right mark.
Just now
I wanted to die!!!
Just now
You asked me to give it a try.
Just now
I found you nowhere...
Just now
I saw you came closer.
Just now
I wanted to count what I have
I found nothing but your love.

15 comments:

Niti said...

small and sweet.kaun tha dimag me us waqt? :-)

Vinay said...

Hey!!!!:)

Nice to see you back, nabanita. Long time.

The short sentences are ur favorite aren they?

And I have seen this feeling recur in mosta ya rhymes...I wanted to die u asked me to give it a try. Nice lines. Shows the emotion. Superb post. I'll post more. Thanks for coming back and livening up my blog.

Nabanita said...

haa haa..thnx vinay...

well u can say this is the style of writing i luv the most...they r really my favourite....

Vinay said...

Well, thank you for that. What job r u doin, if I may ask. Am fine tuning my next post.

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

And my love you'll always have
Till the last breath that I have...

Good to see you posting at least something after a long break...been busy I know....nice comeback[:)]

keep writing & posting!![:)]

[>:D<]

Nabanita said...

dunno how to manage...

just too bzy..& u knw dat....

Vinay said...

Thank you...I still feel there's a long way to go. I wanna write really long poems with a rhyme scheme. That'd be great.

Did ya do yer engineering??

Nabanita said...

YES VINAY..I'VE COMPLETED MY ENGINEERING THIS YEAR...

&with rhyming scheme any kind of poem is great..no matter whether itz long or short...

Vinay said...

Yeah they do come straight from the heart. A poem can highlight any emotion right?

Vinay said...

Hows ya new job? Apart from the fact that its hectic and keeps u quite busy.

Nabanita said...

job is cool....:)

& yaa poem can highlight any emotion..coz emotions r reflections of our heart

Vinay said...

Hope you make it big. I've tried a new style. Gimme a true evaluation.

AmitMakwana said...

lovely poem NABANITA!
hope u r rocking...
take care n have fun...

Sanchari said...

I JUST LOVED IT- SCATTERED EMOTION- UNSTRUCTED & RAW! STRAIGHT FROM THE HERAT - WITH A BIT OF STYLE!!

Sanchari

Nabanita said...

thnx sanchari [:)]

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