Monday, December 18, 2006

ILLUSION???

Once
On a evening
Indolence hold my hand
And took me
To a dark land….
It asked me to believe;
And I saw
Flowers in a dozen…
In my mind
All of a sudden…

And
I started my journey…
Leaving my root…
Behind…
So free
From mind…
But not blind…
With trust
In my heart…
With chances
Of getting hurt…

I……
Saw a spin on path
Lights gone…
Lighter…
Closed my eyes…
No roses were there
Only another twist
On the path…
I……
Left my desires
Only dreams came
With me…
On desert…
On lonely path…
In search of light……

The search did seem
Meaningless…
Suddenly…
With a fragrance
I found a pathway
With a new beam of ray…

You….
Were standing there
With stretched arms
Full of warmth…
As if you crave
All my pain
On you like rain…
That moment…
Mesmerized my thought…
When I felt no hurt…
And found my head
Resting…
On your shoulder…
So happy
Felt like dying
I couldn’t…
But crying…

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

nothing to describe this poem.hey gal,life is an illusion.don't you think so?yeh,i guess you know it.your poem is showing that you know it.

Anonymous said...

nice one.the subject is sweet.your style of writing is pretty different.

Anonymous said...

lovely poem!
so much of positive desires and dreams, expressed with artistic words! lovely one!
hope u r dong fine and studying hard!

Anonymous said...

lovely poem!
so much of positive desires and dreams, expressed with artistic words! lovely one!
hope u r dong fine and studying hard!

absy said...

Amazing........

absy said...

Most of ur poems are based on love,dreams,life,lonliness so on.
A writer is the the one can create all the feelings inside the reader.If u are feeling the feelings while u write,then write n write.......readers are always with u

Teresa Cypher aka T K CypherBuss said...

Beautiful poem. It made me wonder if the subject found mortal love, or immortal love? :-)

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