Wednesday, November 29, 2006

~BACK TO MOON~


Clouds
In the sky…
Floating.
Mind…
A river
Flowing…
Or,
Flying high!!!

Unworthy
Oh you!
Says brain,
See life…
Stop
Taking pain…

Heart laughs,
“I……
Have seen pain…
Still
I laugh…
I get wet…
In rain…”

Brain laughs,
“You…
Are here
To live…
Not to shed
Bloody tear…”

Clouds
Black…
Hides sun…
It says,
“Don’t cry…
I will
Come back…”

Life
Mortal…
Possessions
Material…
What we feel
So unreal…
It is real

It’s night…
When
We dream…
We desire…
We…
Close eyes
Pain dies???

We search
Eldorado…
A journey
Never ending…
Destination
Seems pseudo…

World
A stage…
Clowns
Are we…
So free
But
Inside a cage

Distorted…
Colorless…
It’s death?
Oh you
Don’t die…
Close
Your eyes…
Fly…
There is
A sky…

Afternoon Sun…
On it’s high…
Look at it
And
Close your eye
Inside you…
See the
moon
Even
In afternoon…

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

lovely dream sequence, i must say! i like the way u play with the words and incomplete lines...it allows the reader to imagine on his own...
lovely dear, keep going...

Nabanita said...

thanx amit....

akaash said...

well done, baby!

was a tough one to pull out!!

nice editing!!

Nabanita said...

Aakaash-hmmm... kejaane

Teresa Cypher aka T K CypherBuss said...

This one is amazing! I love the last stanza.

I am guessing that you are a non-native English speaker-- from seeing that your newest works are not in English. I admire how beautifully you write in a language foreign to your native tongue.

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