Wednesday, November 25, 2009

~Aajke~

Aajke nahoy tomar rojer
Rojnaamchar chhuti,
Aajke sudhu moner khatay
Ektuku khunsuti;

Aajke nahoy office tomar
Sopnoloker deshe,
Aajke sudhu notun kore
Vijbo valobeshe...

Aajke hothat bristi chokhe
Haariye jabar daak,
Purono sab sopnogulor
Notun hobar sokh;

Aajke sudhu opor theke
Badhon aasuk kepe;
Aaye bristi amaar kachhe
Dukhho debo mepe.

7 comments:

Sourabh said...

Hmmm... Simply no words to describe the beauty in this simplistic creation !!!
Few things--
1. An amazing depiction of the feelings which everyone of us might have felt, but never been concious about that...

2. I liked the cover of simplicity that is evident in every detailing...

3. I also liked the nostalgia that has been added in one liner touch of sorrow in the last line (that's the best part)...

On the whole a very very lovely composition and it really shows how simple things can be powerful...

Waiting for more of such...

Nabanita said...

@Dadamoni- thanks alot...
yaa I always try to xpress thngs in d simple words...
m glad dat u lykd it :)

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

no words to describe this really.

eta niye agei ami toke sms-e and phn-e bolechhilam!! :)

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

majher duto paragraphs are just stunning...ekdom tor unique style-e express kora..old style :)

Nabanita said...

@abhirup- sab kichhu paltay naa.. :)

VIVEK:) said...

hi,
is this your own creation?
went through some of your bangla poems..n i found dem good..never tried my hands on bangla poetry

Lucifer said...

Kobita amar mathar tan hoye jai :P

Merry Christmas! :)

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