Friday, April 18, 2008

~MYSTIC DESERT~

Everyday...
It kills my life,
With a sharp knife!
Blood flows everyside;
And I scream everynight.

Every new day,
Comes with same old ray;
And...
I wish it to turn night;
Mystic starry and bright.
Life stops me then...
With illusions
To capture my brain.
Hope and dreams to
Hold me back;
Courage to break them...
I alwayz lack.

Losing my mind it seems
Or just another illuding scream!
Lost as dark is lost in dark;
Invisible as spark
Is visible in sparks.

Closing my eyes....
I wont do;
As I call it desert of life...
and I want to know...

I want to know
The end of pain;
Want to know where...
Happiness in tears do rain!!!

Want to send u...
The Rainy smell;
To ring your heart's bell.
To let you know...
It's life - taught me....
To love you

6 comments:

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

"Lost as dark is lost in dark;
Invisible as spark
Is visible in sparks."

"I want to know
The end of pain;
Want to know where...
Happiness in tears do rain!!!"

wonderful wonderful emotions..[:)]..

changed style-e lekha but I absolutely loved it[:)]..

Nabanita said...

:)

Vinay said...

Hey Nabanita

I read the alchemist a few days back and this desert song reminds of the book however as opposed to the book, this poem is great. I liked the bringing of rain and somehow all your poems have the element of love peeking in somewhere...sometimes blatantly sometimes deceptively disguised.

On the whole good one.

Nabanita said...

Hey Vinay thnx man....
Well what about this poem?love was present blatantly or in deceptively disguised form?
thnx alot 4 ur comment...well my blog really misses ur comments on my poems now a days:)

Vinay said...

As for this poem love wasn't showing anywhere till the end where it comes out in bright sunshine.

Vinay said...

As for comments, don worry i'll visit more regularly.

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