Thursday, June 28, 2007

~Transformation~

Some bloody things I need to say,
Please don't runaway...
When you come closer
I wanna love you forever...


I wish I was your love
I wish you were mine.
I watch your smile;
I watch when you are crying.
Oh! I wish you were mine!

And then...
Life took an "U"-turn;
I couldn't find the way to return.
I was stuck in that dark!!!
Couldn't even see any mark...

I was lost inside myself,
Emptiness hold me...my innerself.
Tired I was...broken from inside
Just then you came like a lightening tide!!!

I was crying in the dark...was trying to hold on
No one could hear...I was all alone...
All that I craved someone to love...
You make me close my eyes...and hold your hand
I...that time felt your warmth...

A new path you made...saved me from death;
Came so closer...became my lover.
Now something...i wanna say...
I know you won't runaway...
All I need is you...only you;
Oh darling! be mine...I love you.

10 comments:

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

All I need is you...only you;
Oh darling! be mine...I love you.


Am already yours.And you'll be never alone is all I can say.

Well,as I have been saying,traits of the old poetical Nabanita is clearly visible here.Very nicely composed & that lonely stint@Ganga ghat surely helped then!?![;)]

Nabanita said...

yup....written down then after talking to you....

was trying to be lonely...to compose this one...
& do i need to tell u...this one is just for you????...i knw u r there beside me [:)]

Niti said...

nice poem with lots of emotions.

hey nabz pehechana kya?tum to bhul hi gaye ho yaar.jiniya ne batayi tumhare is blog ke bare main.aur jiniya se tumhari baatein suni maine.acha laga about ur job & love life
u were alwyz been a rockstar & will alwyz be that
keep rocking baby \m/

Nabanita said...

niti sharma????symbiosis mein ho na tum aab???hey kaise vul sakti hu tumhe???how r u?????????
luv life is gr8..
thnx 4 apprciating my poem....luv 2 c u here...
miss yaaaa

AmitMakwana said...

hi Nabanita!
lovely, lovely, lovely poem!
being in love, is the biggest achievement for life! yeah, LOVE transforms our life! wish u get lots of love n joy!
hey one more thing, LOVE does make u a good poet! ha..ha...
take care n have fun!

Nabanita said...

@amit-hey thnx [:)]
after a real long time got ur comment..nice to see that....

Lucifer said...

You have been tagged!

banty said...

those poems r tremendous & lovely.
keep it up...

Nabanita said...

@banty-thnx [:)]

Lucifer said...

Hehe...yes, I will remember that.

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