Tuesday, May 29, 2007

~Rain~

DEDICATED TO- ABHIRUP CHAKRABARTY
Written down while I was standing at a ghaat...

I sensed the breeze
On my face...
Cold... Wet...
I heard the sound
of water...
Silent... Sweet...
I saw the twilight
Black... Dark...
I felt the sky higher
Clouds... Sparks...
And then,
I saw the rain coming...


WHERE ARE YOU?

I wanna get drenched in rain...
Only with you...

&Atlast with a phone call...

Rain has come...
Along with you...

8 comments:

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

A beautiful poem as this dedicated to me!!wow!!I am lucky!!yah..rain...who doesn't want to get drenched in the rain??to drown in the flood of love,passion...nothing much to say,quite speechless I am.

Btw,jedin jedin beroi brishti pore na..dhush!![:(]

Nabanita said...

yaa keno je sedin gulo brishti hoyna [:(]... jaao ba ekdin bristi hobe mon eholo..sedin koek kg dhulo urlo...[:P]...with sum other things...

& well itz me who is lucky..lucky to have sumone so understanding...loving...caring person beside me....to hold my hands...to give me a shoulder while crying...
& this was truly written for you

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

Basically we can echo each other's feelings.I guess that explains it all!![:)]

Nabanita said...

thats true[:)]

Naam mein kya rakha hai!!! said...

warmth of love
in ur heart

drops of rain
to tease and excite

A fried
to feel belonged however remote

U live life every moment
a lovely write..!!!

Nabanita said...

@deba-thankx in loads...a real nice nice comment....[:)]

Lucifer said...

Oh believe me, I won't get stuck.

Pri said...

Wow. Beautiful.

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