Monday, April 02, 2007

~LOVER or TRAITOR~

I wanna say My heartiest sorry to some people.....

Behind the closed door
One small bed;
You and me...
Standing on the floor...

I felt love;
I felt warmth
And I made love!!!
But I don't know how,
I missed you!!!

I closed my eyes;
I felt you...
Inside me!!!
I smiled;
I cried;
I shouted;
I lost it...
I lost it all... to you!!!

But,
It wasn't you...
It can never be you.
But the touch was yours!!!
Inside my mind,
I made myself blind...
And opened up my mind...

But
Don't ever close your eyes...
And never open up your mind.
I'm your present
And I stay there inside your mind...
That's all you'll able to find!!!

So, Don't ever close your eyes;
I don't want you to pay the price.
You are the winner...
Don't make yourself the looser!!!
I've seen your soul
Which you never knew... That i could...
May be, it was a sin
But your soul...there I've seen...
Who are you...
The real you!!!

I'm a creep:
A fucking nonsense!!!
So, don't close your eyes...
On my word...
That makes no sense...

8 comments:

Naam mein kya rakha hai!!! said...

Intimate literally but really a bold one!!!

:)

trisha said...

a real bold one !!!
but very nicely executed.
keep it up

manjula said...

well, as a girl all i can say is someone needs a lot of imagination power & guts to write down something like this.the theme is excellent.

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

This ranks as one the best(if not the very best)of your creations.The theme,the emotional content,the expression(specially in the first 4 paragraphs)simply bowled me over.Never have u dared to write on a topic so bold as this & u deserve all the kudos for breaking the general taboo regarding this topic & posting something so rich like this.

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Nabanita said...

@abhi-thnx so much......
& obviously u too deserve a thanks from my heart..coz i firs discussed with u about the theme......thnx dear :)

The Painkiller said...

idea-ta oshaaadharon.......presentatn-o byappok....perfect combinatn...

Nabanita said...

thnx aveek [:)]

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