[PENNED IT DOWN IN MOBILE.....WITHOUT ANY THOUGHT...]
Just now
I felt helpless;
Just now
I felt your embrace.
Just now
I wanted to runaway
Just now
You've shown me the right way.
Just now
I closed my eyes in dark;
Just now
You brought to me the right mark.
Just now
I wanted to die!!!
Just now
You asked me to give it a try.
Just now
I found you nowhere...
Just now
I saw you came closer.
Just now
I wanted to count what I have
I found nothing but your love.
15 comments:
small and sweet.kaun tha dimag me us waqt? :-)
Hey!!!!:)
Nice to see you back, nabanita. Long time.
The short sentences are ur favorite aren they?
And I have seen this feeling recur in mosta ya rhymes...I wanted to die u asked me to give it a try. Nice lines. Shows the emotion. Superb post. I'll post more. Thanks for coming back and livening up my blog.
haa haa..thnx vinay...
well u can say this is the style of writing i luv the most...they r really my favourite....
Well, thank you for that. What job r u doin, if I may ask. Am fine tuning my next post.
And my love you'll always have
Till the last breath that I have...
Good to see you posting at least something after a long break...been busy I know....nice comeback[:)]
keep writing & posting!![:)]
[>:D<]
dunno how to manage...
just too bzy..& u knw dat....
Thank you...I still feel there's a long way to go. I wanna write really long poems with a rhyme scheme. That'd be great.
Did ya do yer engineering??
YES VINAY..I'VE COMPLETED MY ENGINEERING THIS YEAR...
&with rhyming scheme any kind of poem is great..no matter whether itz long or short...
Yeah they do come straight from the heart. A poem can highlight any emotion right?
Hows ya new job? Apart from the fact that its hectic and keeps u quite busy.
job is cool....:)
& yaa poem can highlight any emotion..coz emotions r reflections of our heart
Hope you make it big. I've tried a new style. Gimme a true evaluation.
lovely poem NABANITA!
hope u r rocking...
take care n have fun...
I JUST LOVED IT- SCATTERED EMOTION- UNSTRUCTED & RAW! STRAIGHT FROM THE HERAT - WITH A BIT OF STYLE!!
Sanchari
thnx sanchari [:)]
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