Dedicated to- To the biggest IDIOT (The Abnormal ) of this earth
Sorry for dedicating...
In my dream...
I look back
to that day...
the day when
I was me...
The joy of innocence...
with pure heart;
the day of smile,
without being hurt...
I desire a time
A time for nothing,
Just you and me...
And silence...
When we talk nothing...
Your arms around
my shoulder...
To offer me rest.
With warmth and care.
I won't ask for love
That's not mine.
But You can't be lost...
You were never mine...
I never own you;
I cannot even ask for.
I find myself lonely...
At the core.
I don't know
What i want,
Just like a puppet;
I'm playing my part...
Don't come
To save me...
This is my world
The real me...
11 comments:
i don't know who this anonymous is, and why do you at all allow comments such as this!
anyway,...
yah!
nice poem nabanita.
MAY BE THE PERSON CONCERENED HAD ASKED FROM YOU TIME...
MAYBE HE FAILED TO BE HIMSELF OWING TO A BLOCK...
HE JUST H-A-D TO CLEAR THAT BLOCK... BEFORE HE COULD START AGAIN.. AFRESH!
MAYBE HE HAD ASKED FROM YOU T-I-M-E!
YOU MADE HIM GO BACK TO HIS BLOCK,...
MAYBE,..
FOR EVER!
SOME MEMORIES BRING BACK SUCH UNREST,..
THAT YOU FEEL LIKE GOING BACK..
AND KISSING AND MURDERING THE PERSON CONCERNED..
AT THE SAME TIME!
IT'S A TORTUREOUS EXPERIENCE... MAYBE TO HAVE FOR A LIFETIME..
EMBEDDED IN THE VERY DEPTHS OF YOUR HEART FOREVER...
YOU FEEL LIKE ENDING THIS LIFE..
WHICH WOULD FOREVER BE INCOMPLETE!
BUT KNOW THIS NABANITA,...
THIS HAPPENS AT THE BOTH SIDES OF THE FENCE!
VERY SAME FEELINGS,.. COMING BACK TO YOU LIKE A HAUNTING NIGHTMARE...
BUT IT COMES BACK TO BOTH THE PERSONS..
YOU ARE ONE.
AND THE OTHER EXPERIENCES THE VERY SAME THINGS...TOO.
can u plz explain ur comments...
happy woman's day to the respected!
u r the source of inspiration my friend!
wish u all the successes dear!
happy woman's day my dear!
hi Nabanita!
nice poem full of emotions though!
take care!
i heartily say a sorry for such meaningless comments...
you have the choice of deleting them...
i am sorry..
i say this again!
bah..nice to see a love poem(at least the first part) after such a long time!!nicely composed.
'I don't know
What i want,
Just like a puppet;
I'm playing my part..."
Awesome lines these..so very true.A real nice one after a long time{;)]
@abhirup- thnx so much buddy......ur coments r valuable to me...
lovely poem...
lost in ur world.
knock knock...
pls bahar ayiyee aur ham gareeb logo ke liye agala post likhiye.
nice poem.
Awesome poem dear....u r really gr8..
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