Jodi boli urbe pother dhulo
Jodi boli hariye jabe poth
Jodi boli sopno sudhui vanga
Jodi soriye ni aaj haat...
Tobe ki
Themey jaabe tomar onuvuti?
Themey jabe gopon kotha bola?
Themey jabe notun sopno dekha
Thamiye debe eksathe poth chola?
Abar
Jodi boli du vaag hobe sagor
Jodi boli pahar khujibe chand?
Jodi boli harabe snighdhotara
Jodi vange chokher jol aaj baandh?
Tokhon
Themey jabe tomar haater porosh
Themey jabe chupkothara abar
Themey jabe ushno saannidhyo
Themey giyeo poth cholbe abaar...
Tarpor hothat
Jodi pothe thaamte vule jao
Rajkonnye bondi hobe abaar...
Jodi firey aaste kobhu chaao
Rupkothara poth dekhabe ferar...
4 comments:
Onek din pore I really loved this one of yours. That magician is back :) .. Khub shundor and expressive lekha in our unique style.
hmm....janina ki reaxn debo..coz kichhu vebe lekha noy eta..just likhte ichhe korchilo kichu ekta...:)
There's a uniqueness in this style... Very rhythmic one which is very very lovely to read over and over again.
From "Abar..." though I felt a the composition going somehow wayward or rather lost it's emotional appeal still due to it's style it's pleasurable read.
Unique and playful style is this composition's undoubted high point.
Baahh...besh shundor ak onyo dhoroner kobita....
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