Uttopto sondhebelar buke
Ushno chokhe kaalbosekher chhoya
Bristi tokhon shada kalo chhobi
Onuvitura shukno mrito kaya…
Monkharaper golpo shuru abaar
Baakrudhho holo jotil mon
Tobuo kichhu asha niye chokhe
Betha baray ochena mon kemon…
Sopno gulo sopno hoyei thaake
Bastobta sudhui dhusor dhulo
Sokal sondhe kabyo khelar iti
jibon bollo- “amaar sathe khelo”
Jitte jitte hothat ulto chaale
saap ludo te shuru odhopoton
khelar majhe ottohasi hese
jibon chole nijer ichhe moton….
4 comments:
Onobodyo... onek din por ekta khub khub shundor lekha.. THE Queen's definitely back... :) ..
and well.. I know and am here :) ...
no one is back...n m not any quees..amaar theke hazar gun vaalo lekeh emon at least hazar jon aache...
chesta korchilam likhte...hoye gelo...etukui..khub ekta spontaneous lekha noy eta (honest confession)...but yaa at least kichhu ekta holo etao hoyto positive ei muhurte for me...
1ta word o likhte parchilam na jekhane..sekhane etogulo line...letz c...
r last line ta bujhlam naa
sheta details-e explained onno jaygaye...
After a long time... Yes after a long time !!!
A brilliant depiction of a brutal face of complex emotions. I must say this is not an easy to thing to write, but you have been, as always, able to give words beautifully.
Although most of it is wrapped in somberness but still I am impressed by this line- "jibon bollo- “amaar sathe khelo”". Able to give a touch of acceptance and hope with life.
Well done really... Come up with more !!!
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