Ora pother dhare goragori dey
Dhulobali mekhe;
Kana chal r mota bhaate
Din katay sukhe.
Chherakhora jama pore
Haat baariye daray;
Vanga khelnay anondo pay
Nalar jole jhapay...
Footpath e haath mele dey
Aadhuli poisa futo;
Sobuj baatir wrong route-e
Kheluk saap-ludo.
Dekhe vaabi esab niyei
Aache ora besh;
Moi diye opore uthe
Saap er mukhe sesh...
2 comments:
Already told you about this. Fantastic piece.Very well written and the way you express yourself is the thing to look out for.
Darun hoyechhe...kudos!![:)]...
"Moi diye opore uthe
Saap er mukhe sesh..."
What a line... Simply outstanding !!!
It's a topic which probably as far as I remember you touched for the first line... But still sensitivity is evident in every line, bizzare yet expressive highly !!!
Good begining...
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