I wanna say My heartiest sorry to some people.....
Behind the closed door
One small bed;
You and me...
Standing on the floor...
I felt love;
I felt warmth
And I made love!!!
But I don't know how,
I missed you!!!
I closed my eyes;
I felt you...
Inside me!!!
I smiled;
I cried;
I shouted;
I lost it...
I lost it all... to you!!!
But,
It wasn't you...
It can never be you.
But the touch was yours!!!
Inside my mind,
I made myself blind...
And opened up my mind...
But
Don't ever close your eyes...
And never open up your mind.
I'm your present
And I stay there inside your mind...
That's all you'll able to find!!!
So, Don't ever close your eyes;
I don't want you to pay the price.
You are the winner...
Don't make yourself the looser!!!
I've seen your soul
Which you never knew... That i could...
May be, it was a sin
But your soul...there I've seen...
Who are you...
The real you!!!
I'm a creep:
A fucking nonsense!!!
So, don't close your eyes...
On my word...
That makes no sense...
8 comments:
Intimate literally but really a bold one!!!
:)
a real bold one !!!
but very nicely executed.
keep it up
well, as a girl all i can say is someone needs a lot of imagination power & guts to write down something like this.the theme is excellent.
This ranks as one the best(if not the very best)of your creations.The theme,the emotional content,the expression(specially in the first 4 paragraphs)simply bowled me over.Never have u dared to write on a topic so bold as this & u deserve all the kudos for breaking the general taboo regarding this topic & posting something so rich like this.
@abhi-thnx so much......
& obviously u too deserve a thanks from my heart..coz i firs discussed with u about the theme......thnx dear :)
idea-ta oshaaadharon.......presentatn-o byappok....perfect combinatn...
thnx aveek [:)]
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